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Catch a falling tear drop, taste it\'s bitterness
spin around in circles and lose sight of what\'s
around you, cry to feel, laugh at the inevitable.
It\'ll all be better tomorrow...
let the sorrow wash over you, leaving only the beauty,
smile at your scars, dance in the rain....
Sing while you sob, look through your tears
at the beauty that surrounds you, it\'s so much
more than the pain. Don\'t make sense, stare at the sky,
dance in the rain...
©2003-2009 ~taproot
:icontaproot:

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Makes me feel better to write....I can't really describe this.

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:iconflamingrose:
wow this is absolutely beautiful and it perfectly portrays thoughts and emotions ive felt before but couldnt express. relieving and freeing...

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don't let your love
become a delicate display.

... all my love and adoration.
:iconinevitabletears:
once again this is a great piece of writing...the way u write wat u feel enwraps the feeling and gives such a description to whats going on that i see it...keep it up this is really good
adios

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hearts are broken everyday
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~la-ch
~69
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:iconaggro:
Very beautiful. Keep working at this. You are awesome.
:icongreeneyeslove:
This nearly made me cry. It is absolutely gorgeous, and so amazingly expressive. You have definitely tugged at my heartstrings. (I absolutely LOVE to dance in the rain... :-) (Smile) ) Ahh. I like everything about it. I was going to try to give you constructive criticism or something, but all I can say is well done!
THIS is my favorite part:

look through your tears
at the beauty that surrounds you, it's so much
more than the pain.

it flows very nicely, and i like the alliteration of "sing while you sob," "stare at the sky," and "smile at your scars."

Thanks for writing such a lovely poem!

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~:heart: J :heart:~

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"It is not with a closed heart
that one will open new doors." ~Lustrum

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March 1, 2003

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